Sometimes a theme sneaks up on you. In a good way! Not like when my kids hide under my bathroom cabinet at 6 am and jump out, moaning like a devolved Pokémon — no wonder I'm often Drowzee.
One of the first things I noted was that SLOPPY JOE was great fill. No doubt, an evocative term. (My kids make sloppy grilled cheese sandwiches, sloppy waffles, sloppy milk …) It wasn't until I reached LAZY SUSAN that I started to realize that it wasn't just great fill — it's thematic!
I'm not usually impressed with high theme density because it often feels like showing off without extra payoff. Today though, it gave the puzzle meatiness, making me feel full. SLOPPY JOEs do fill you up!
Tight theme, too. I spent five minutes trying to think of another (adjective) + (name) phrase and could only come up with EMPTY-HEADED JEFF. What, you say that's not a real phrase? Oh, how little you know me.
Speaking of SLOPPY JOE … kicking off a northwest corner with AWNS is a big NONO. That's just screaming at a solver to walk away. Even if they make it past that, sticking them with GARRET and HADJ — crossing each other — makes for such a newb-alienating experience.
(When I related this to Jim Horne, he tactfully mentioned that, for example, the artists in La Bohème live in a garret. I tactfully nodded as I scrambled to look up La Bohème. I totally knew that it's a ... ballet. No, an opera! I was just kidding!)
The theme grew on me, to the point where I gave it some POW! consideration. And the bonuses in the fill were so fun! RAY GUNS, ZURICH, GEYSER, KENYAN = great additions. I didn't even mind a bit of SUER sewerage as a price to pay since at least solvers can derive this oddball word from "sue."
With some grid revision — if you already have an extra black square before GEYSER, why not try one at the S of SKYPE too, to remove AWNS? — it coulda been a contender.